Con’s:
You need more dialoge during the sex because all you mainly did was describe it, your next story needs to have more dialoge during sex.«12345» the experience would have done you good LOLReport 2008-12-19 10:39:59Good story.OrtsmaReport 2008-12-05 01:15:07″Never saw her again…”? 59 s«12345»anonymous readerReport 2013-10-15 22:40:51good story but needs more storylineanonymous readerReport 2012-06-27 03:03:06hmmmmmmmm too bad you didn’t get to fuck her more. Xnxx porn . . . . … lol Great Story though.Report 2008-11-28 21:24:44Decent story
Pro’s:
Good Storyline
Not a half bad job with describing the sex. lol Great Story though.Report 2008-11-28 21:24:44Decent story
Pro’s:
Good Storyline
Not a half bad job with describing the sex. 59 s«12345»anonymous readerReport 2013-10-15 22:40:51good story but needs more storylineanonymous readerReport 2012-06-27 03:03:06hmmmmmmmm too bad you didn’t get to fuck her more. . . . . … the experience would have done you good LOLReport 2008-12-19 10:39:59Good story.OrtsmaReport 2008-12-05 01:15:07″Never saw her again…”? the experience would have done you good LOLReport 2008-12-19 10:39:59Good story.OrtsmaReport 2008-12-05 01:15:07″Never saw her again…”? What kind of shit is that? 59 s«12345»anonymous readerReport 2013-10-15 22:40:51good story but needs more storylineanonymous readerReport 2012-06-27 03:03:06hmmmmmmmm too bad you didn’t get to fuck her more. . . . . …
