I also liked the end where you fing out Jill has a boyfriend. Sex xnxx watch the grammar, particularly your tenses. watch the grammar, particularly your tenses. its better than the first! Your getting better!!!«123» this series is very good so far, and i would love to see you take it somewhere great. you had the same problem in part one, but get part three out soon!!Anonymous readerReport 2008-07-08 17:53:51Dude you deffently need to write a few moreAnonymous readerReport 2008-06-07 14:15:10good job but check your grammar. its better than the first! watch the grammar, particularly your tenses. watch the grammar, particularly your tenses. I also liked the end where you fing out Jill has a boyfriend. you had the same problem in part one, but get part three out soon!!Anonymous readerReport 2008-07-08 17:53:51Dude you deffently need to write a few moreAnonymous readerReport 2008-06-07 14:15:10good job but check your grammar. You need to watch your tences… 11 comments«123»IntriguedReport 2008-08-12 01:19:51So when is part three coming out? this series is very good so far, and i would love to see you take it somewhere great. You need to watch your tences… this series is very good so far, and i would love to see you take it somewhere great.
