Don’t make it too obvious that you’ve only recently been weaned off Barbie dolls.READERReport 2004-07-07 08:17:07Hey, This is a good story, but you need to edit it for gramer. Xnxx 5 s«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-08-10 11:35:49LOLOL what the hell is 9 inches and 3 inches long?? I give it a 6.5/10READERReport 2005-01-25 11:06:309inchs and about 3inchs long – hahahahahaahaahahahaREADERReport 2004-07-11 22:56:30Use more and shorter paragraphs. I give it a 6.5/10READERReport 2005-01-25 11:06:309inchs and about 3inchs long – hahahahahaahaahahahaREADERReport 2004-07-11 22:56:30Use more and shorter paragraphs. xDREADERReport 2005-09-28 22:15:11Pretty good, but practice on your writing skills, you miss spelled all the way through, but it seems like it was all your experience, good to read though. The beginning of the second paragraph is not easy to follow. Don’t make it too obvious that you’ve only recently been weaned off Barbie dolls.READERReport 2004-07-07 08:17:07Hey, This is a good story, but you need to edit it for gramer. Don’t make it too obvious that you’ve only recently been weaned off Barbie dolls.READERReport 2004-07-07 08:17:07Hey, This is a good story, but you need to edit it for gramer. xDREADERReport 2005-09-28 22:15:11Pretty good, but practice on your writing skills, you miss spelled all the way through, but it seems like it was all your experience, good to read though.
