7 comments«12»Dudley DowrongReport 2021-01-21 00:05:06Enjoyed, too! I didn’t notice the errorr as previous reader. Xnxx video THANKSAnonymous readerReport 2009-02-15 14:31:53bullshitAnonymous readerReport 2009-02-12 22:34:20Your writing has potential, but you need to learn to proofread.Anonymous readerReport 2009-02-01 23:12:50Nice erotic story but some of the sequence seems impossible, being in a 69 position , she sucking your dick and you sucking her tits? Some paragraphs a little long; still easy reading. Some paragraphs a little long; still easy reading. Well if you are a midget it might happen. Some paragraphs a little long; still easy reading. Well if you are a midget it might happen. I didn’t notice the errorr as previous reader. But otherwise, the story was very well done.Anonymous readerReport 2009-02-01 00:23:26needs proof reading, there’s words missing and bad grammer in places…other than that it’s a great story, or the start of a good series…8/10
btw, what the hell is a whewhooo?«12» Refresing new author & stories. 7 comments«12»Dudley DowrongReport 2021-01-21 00:05:06Enjoyed, too! KEEP WRITING; any 3 could be extended to a series. Well if you are a midget it might happen. KEEP WRITING; any 3 could be extended to a series.
