but I really enjoyed your story, and your ideas. Sex xnxx kucch bhi likhata.anonymous readerReport 2013-11-30 00:44:14yo ho hoe yes no maybe so«1» You’ve got the story-telling part down (done right) but your mistakes in the sentences kinda threw things off for me. The only bad thing I found that should be addressed is that you should proof-read it a few times before publishing it. I am looking forward to seeing more from you so I hope you write more. I’m afraid that is why your approval score is lower than I expected. I’m afraid that is why your approval score is lower than I expected. I’m afraid that is why your approval score is lower than I expected. I’m afraid that is why your approval score is lower than I expected. kucch bhi likhata.anonymous readerReport 2013-11-30 00:44:14yo ho hoe yes no maybe so«1» You’ve got the story-telling part down (done right) but your mistakes in the sentences kinda threw things off for me. There were a few things wrong with the grammar/ writing… but I really enjoyed your story, and your ideas.
