rudstillhard oneREADERReport 2006-07-16 14:36:04Eh. Sex xnxx writer, u gotta 10, for talk, the story, and the sex. its true about the way women talk when theyre gettin fucked but seriously that was a great attempt. Nah, rework the language a little and try again.«1» Thanks heaps! Pt.2 plzREADERReport 2007-05-31 07:57:03I thought it was awesome. The language was not very believable. rudstillhard oneREADERReport 2006-07-16 14:36:04Eh. Thanks heaps! writer, u gotta 10, for talk, the story, and the sex. you probably need a little more experience both sexually and as a writer before you try to write a story in a female voice. Nah, rework the language a little and try again.«1» I doubt very many middle aged women frequently use cunt and cum-slut in this context. The language was not very believable. you probably need a little more experience both sexually and as a writer before you try to write a story in a female voice. rudstillhard oneREADERReport 2006-07-16 14:36:04Eh. rudstillhard oneREADERReport 2006-07-16 14:36:04Eh. I doubt very many middle aged women frequently use cunt and cum-slut in this context. rudstillhard oneREADERReport 2006-07-16 14:36:04Eh. rudstillhard oneREADERReport 2006-07-16 14:36:04Eh. rudstillhard oneREADERReport 2006-07-16 14:36:04Eh. And oral cavity? Thanks heaps! writer, u gotta 10, for talk, the story, and the sex. And oral cavity?
