Do you wank off about those great days, greenhornet144? Xnxx com 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-04-23 09:29:18Pretty poor writing with horrible grammar, spelling, and syntax, and a lack of sentence structure and any semblance of paragraphs, proper punctuation and dialog. Work on your grammar, sentence structure, and plot. There are many more errors, as well, but the worst offense is inconsideration of your reader who must struggle through your story. But, you are a very talented writer. Would like to hear further adventures. Just need more practice, I suppose.SwingerReport 2009-09-03 15:53:36Story horny but paragraphs needed. 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-04-23 09:29:18Pretty poor writing with horrible grammar, spelling, and syntax, and a lack of sentence structure and any semblance of paragraphs, proper punctuation and dialog. 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-04-23 09:29:18Pretty poor writing with horrible grammar, spelling, and syntax, and a lack of sentence structure and any semblance of paragraphs, proper punctuation and dialog. thank you.jakthemessiahReport 2009-08-18 21:41:42Dude… Do you wank off about those great days, greenhornet144? Or are you now over them? Or are you now over them?
