Most of the other stories explain the relationship before the interaction gets too hot. Starting off, to me it was so confusing, I didn’t even get deep into the story. Xnxx tv 6 comments«12»Dudley DowrongReport 2018-06-15 20:47:56I think you need to better identify & develop characters. A reader shouldn’t have to read the story 2-3 times to learn the characters & their relationship to each other (including the 1st person telling the story). 1st comment incomplete!!!Dudley DowrongReport 2018-06-15 20:22:16I think you need to better identify & develop characters. Who is Kurk? A reader shouldn’t have to read the story 2-3 times to learn the characters & their relationship to each other (including the 1st person telling the story). You drained yourself telling the first part of the story so there was nothing left for the sweet part.«12» Starting off, to me it was so confusing, I didn’t even get deep into the story. Most of the other stories explain the relationship before the interaction gets too hot.
