7/10READERReport 2005-09-12 14:58:28to writer “Archaic”: You’re a worse speller than some of the so-called sex story “authors.” Come on, guy, Hemingway has only one “M.” and “primitive” doesn’t contain an “A.”
The story wasn’t bad at all, I thought. read some Hemmingway and try again.«1» A Hot Stud seeking aFillie in Heat..READERReport 2005-09-14 13:46:13Not bad at all. Xnxx video . …made me cum! 4 s«1»READERReport 2006-01-03 08:35:31Hey, I really loved you short, Sweet, and sexeriffic story..I ssure wish you would tell us some more of you getting your wet, Hot Pussy filled, first with his big dick and then with his cum.. Who gives a shit about sentence structure? If we were reading for literary purposes we wouldn’t be reading free porn stories online. Your dialogue was very primative, your descriptions were juvenile, it just was not very entertaining. 7/10.READERReport 2005-09-12 11:58:31You pretty much hit every one of my pet peeves with this story. This story is sexy and that’s what matters to me!
