Keep trying.READERReport 2007-08-13 04:52:39It was OK, with a little practice you will do better.READERReport 2007-07-01 02:59:45Stupid as fuck.«123» Keep trying.READERReport 2007-08-13 04:52:39It was OK, with a little practice you will do better.READERReport 2007-07-01 02:59:45Stupid as fuck.«123» 14 comments«123»READERReport 2008-02-14 23:00:29its an ok story you really need to work on how it was written. Xnxx com you got the two mixed up.READERReport 2007-08-17 17:09:27You left it open so you have a chance to improve, proofread, spellcheck, extend your plot, give it some more time and you should be fine. 14 comments«123»READERReport 2008-02-14 23:00:29its an ok story you really need to work on how it was written. Keep trying.READERReport 2007-08-13 04:52:39It was OK, with a little practice you will do better.READERReport 2007-07-01 02:59:45Stupid as fuck.«123» Keep trying.READERReport 2007-08-13 04:52:39It was OK, with a little practice you will do better.READERReport 2007-07-01 02:59:45Stupid as fuck.«123» work on sentence structure and grammar.READERReport 2007-10-05 12:15:19t was ok but you need to spell her right and also spell here right. the story sounded like someone very very young wrote it. you got the two mixed up.READERReport 2007-08-17 17:09:27You left it open so you have a chance to improve, proofread, spellcheck, extend your plot, give it some more time and you should be fine.
