Could have used a bit more description of the physical appearances of the two, but the actual sex was good.READERReport 2004-08-04 13:30:14I loved it! Xnxx sex 6 comments«12»READERReport 2007-07-04 16:24:5510/10READERReport 2005-12-26 00:19:28That’s a pretty solid story. It made me long for some sweet pussy. Think your stories over a bit first, write it, then read and edit it, then re-read and re-edit it, if you want to write a good story look at other things but the obvious as well . Build up a strong vocabulary, learn alot of synonumus words or alternative phrasings so that if you have to repeat yourself, it won’t sound repetative.Good LucREADERReport 2004-06-22 13:31:51I liked it and fuck those who didn’t keep makin more«12» Don’t forget to learn from others and their mistakes either, to be a great writer you should read alot, it helps when you are building sentenses. Don’t forget to learn from others and their mistakes either, to be a great writer you should read alot, it helps when you are building sentenses. YOu made it so real I could almost taste it.’
GreatREADERReport 2004-07-21 19:00:22all the “try to be sensitive-stuff” seems a bit unnessesary considering the lame “I think I have a solution to your problem blablabla”.
