I admit I didn’t make it even a third of the way through this story. I admit I didn’t make it even a third of the way through this story. Xnxx sex Also can someone point out the spelling and grammatical errors (other than the weirds A’s) in my stories because i just put this through a spell check on Microsoft word and there were no mistakes???anonymous readerReport 2012-12-03 00:27:51Good story but leave the  out of the storyanonymous readerReport 2012-12-02 23:19:06I gave you a positive rating because your subject matter has promise and this story definitely needs to be continued. 17 comments«1234»robsterthefoxReport 2012-12-03 00:56:53Thanks everyone for your support and I am currently working on the second part of the story and it is looking to be pretty good. Your writing shows some talent, so don’t give up.anonymous readerReport 2012-12-02 20:52:17I’m wondering if English is your first language, if it is you really need to proofread your work. With that being said, you definitely need to proof read your work before submitting it, or else have someone do it for you.
