there’s only so much you can do. Xnxx porn So i feel that longer stories are rated higher than they should be. there’s only so much you can do. you’re obviously getting bored and tired and the stories aren’t as good anymore. come back when you’re refreshed!READERReport 2004-09-13 22:20:27Bug eyed is what reading your stories has done to me.there is nothing wrong with the content, but the way you structure your stories needs alot of work.READERReport 2004-09-13 19:51:32Great Story..I love the way you introduce more characters even if is just for a short time.. Maybe i should just post the next two or three as one. … you’re obviously getting bored and tired and the stories aren’t as good anymore. I think that if i made all these into one big story, or maybe two big stories, instead of posting them seperately by part, they would get much higher ratings. 6 comments«12»READERReport 2004-09-17 14:34:31I am working on Part XX, and I think it will be everyone’s new favorite, including me.
