it was a least 5 minutes . some tiny bit of realism would make this better .MoneReport 2009-08-21 19:07:47Very nice… Xnxx tv best of luck.«12» I concur, however, with latino; you should do more to bring out the “latina” qualities. be descriptive. Do keep writing. be descriptive. Do keep writing. 10 comments«12»TOACHEZReport 2010-07-27 21:01:13it took too long to start the sex . it was a least 5 minutes . maybe that can cum in the next story…??READERReport 2008-03-16 21:57:08makes me hard, I need to check my FICO and look at housesREADERReport 2008-02-24 01:42:34I want to fuck, mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmREADERReport 2005-12-02 16:41:43Allow me to first compliment you on a nice story. reminds me of the sex movies on cinemax . best of luck.«12» be descriptive. be descriptive. i think teach’s suggestion of sprinkling in some spanish is a good one! some tiny bit of realism would make this better .MoneReport 2009-08-21 19:07:47Very nice… Flow was good, story was believable, and pretty well written. reminds me of the sex movies on cinemax . it was a least 5 minutes . reminds me of the sex movies on cinemax . 10 comments«12»TOACHEZReport 2010-07-27 21:01:13it took too long to start the sex . Do keep writing.
