personality and character traits, how they interact in normal situations, etc. personality and character traits, how they interact in normal situations, etc. Xnxx com delete and rewrite using a good editor before reposting THEN IT MIGHT BE WORTH READING.anonymous readerReport 2013-06-01 18:21:12Not really much to say that hasn’t already been said. WHAT KIND OF SEXUAL EXPERIENCE DO THEY HAVE. A longer build up would help, i.e. WHAT KIND OF RELATIONSHIP DID THEY HAVE BEFORE THIS? where is the background and character development? I’d still give 5 stars for the story and look forward to part 2. WHAT KIND OF SEXUAL EXPERIENCE DO THEY HAVE. WHERE ARE THEY? YOU NEED A LOT MORE DETAIL AND AND A MUCH LONGER CHAPTER TO TELL THE STORY. personality and character traits, how they interact in normal situations, etc. WHERE ARE THEY? WHAT KIND OF SEXUAL EXPERIENCE DO THEY HAVE. who are they and why should we care about them or want them together? WHAT KIND OF RELATIONSHIP DID THEY HAVE BEFORE THIS? Me personally I give it 3 out of 5 and I look foward to see this progress.anonymous readerReport 2013-04-19 06:01:46A great story but needs to be longer. this is a first draft only and need major work before it is posted. personality and character
