I heard in her mind, ‘god he so cute and I just want to fuck his brains out.’ The double is heard and the single is thoughts. None the less keep us posted if you’re going to write another part please!anonymous readerReport 2012-08-10 13:50:37BRILLIANT !!! Xnxx tv Only a suggestion. None the less keep us posted if you’re going to write another part please!anonymous readerReport 2012-08-10 13:50:37BRILLIANT !!! Only a suggestion. 9 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2015-04-04 04:04:49Great story, so far. I would also consider quote from other people time in different paragraphs as well. I heard in her mind, ‘god he so cute and I just want to fuck his brains out.’ The double is heard and the single is thoughts. I would suggest keeping to one perspective at a time. None the less keep us posted if you’re going to write another part please!anonymous readerReport 2012-08-10 13:50:37BRILLIANT !!! If you going to have two different type of quotes use different methods from speech quotes from mental quotes. I would also consider quote from other people time in different paragraphs as well. I would also consider quote from other people time in different paragraphs as well. Keep writing.JohnThomas63118Report 2014-05-14 22:11:14First, this is a good story and imagining, a very nice start to a possible great serial.
