5 s«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-04-30 10:10:53i masturbated for 10 seconds the rest was dull unlike these other stories talk to the writers of the other stories you need helpanonymous readerReport 2011-04-23 09:03:32Besides the lack of paragraphs, it was poorly written. Xnxx If you don’t understand English Composition don’t waste your time and ours.chocolate thunda19Report 2011-04-21 01:09:50not 2 bad, but give more details and space out your sentences more. Also proofread your work, that way you wont have many mistakesanonymous readerReport 2011-04-21 00:35:07That was bad. … More details on the sex.«1» Also proofread your work, that way you wont have many mistakesanonymous readerReport 2011-04-21 00:35:07That was bad. … If you don’t understand English Composition don’t waste your time and ours.chocolate thunda19Report 2011-04-21 01:09:50not 2 bad, but give more details and space out your sentences more. Also proofread your work, that way you wont have many mistakesanonymous readerReport 2011-04-21 00:35:07That was bad. … If you don’t understand English Composition don’t waste your time and ours.chocolate thunda19Report 2011-04-21 01:09:50not 2 bad, but give more details and space out your sentences more. The story jumped all over.anonymous readerReport 2011-04-21 05:53:49Learn to use paragraphs, most here will not even bother to read such drivel that runs like this.
