6 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2016-09-07 18:00:16Its fine but not enough sex initanonymous readerReport 2013-12-09 03:06:07Too short. Poor character development 6/10 at bestsingleagain1692Report 2012-09-05 14:21:49your story is vary good for a firstLoverbrReport 2012-08-29 09:43:53Part two has no interrupted sex try reading it. Xnxx 6 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2016-09-07 18:00:16Its fine but not enough sex initanonymous readerReport 2013-12-09 03:06:07Too short. And as for paragraphs Im having to type these in a text then copy and paste so thats hard to do, thank you for reading tho.anonymous readerReport 2012-08-29 08:07:23Paragraphs would make it much easier to read.«12» Poor character development 6/10 at bestsingleagain1692Report 2012-09-05 14:21:49your story is vary good for a firstLoverbrReport 2012-08-29 09:43:53Part two has no interrupted sex try reading it. Poor character development 6/10 at bestsingleagain1692Report 2012-09-05 14:21:49your story is vary good for a firstLoverbrReport 2012-08-29 09:43:53Part two has no interrupted sex try reading it. And as for paragraphs Im having to type these in a text then copy and paste so thats hard to do, thank you for reading tho.anonymous readerReport 2012-08-29 08:07:23Paragraphs would make it much easier to read.«12»
