17 s«1234»robsterthefoxReport 2012-12-03 00:56:53Thanks everyone for your support and I am currently working on the second part of the story and it is looking to be pretty good. Xnxx porn Not perfect but a very good read ! 17 s«1234»robsterthefoxReport 2012-12-03 00:56:53Thanks everyone for your support and I am currently working on the second part of the story and it is looking to be pretty good. You have numerous spelling and grammatical errors which should be obvious to you when you proof read your work. I’am very sorry about the weird A’s but they were not there when I submitted the stories so can any members on this that knows how i can take them out because i want all my stories to be the best for you guys. Your writing shows some talent, so don’t give up.anonymous readerReport 2012-12-02 20:52:17I’m wondering if English is your first language, if it is you really need to proofread your work. More please !«1234» I admit I didn’t make it even a third of the way through this story.
