Just because you’re not an illiterate dumbass doesn’t mean that you can write a story. It would be better to find someone else to proofread it so that you don’t keep making the same mkstake. Xnxx sex It would be better to find someone else to proofread it so that you don’t keep making the same mkstake. Made me cum hard and I’d rate it a 8/10.anonymous readerReport 2012-08-24 06:59:40kyle you need n to suck you dryanonymous readerReport 2011-03-06 08:59:43Not too bad of a story, but get a proofreader who does well in English, because your spelling, grammar, punctuation, possessives, and tenses have many errors, which make this story difficult to read.Anonymous readerReport 2009-03-24 13:11:15Good story! There was no build up. Made me cum hard and I’d rate it a 8/10.anonymous readerReport 2012-08-24 06:59:40kyle you need n to suck you dryanonymous readerReport 2011-03-06 08:59:43Not too bad of a story, but get a proofreader who does well in English, because your spelling, grammar, punctuation, possessives, and tenses have many errors, which make this story difficult to read.Anonymous readerReport 2009-03-24 13:11:15Good story! There was no build up. blunt. There was no build up. It would be better to find someone else to proofread it so that you don’t keep making the same mkstake.




















