The only criticism I can give you is that you could take more time, add more detail, slowly build it up. Love the uses of spells and charms with Arthur and Hermoine!TobianoReport 2013-03-26 19:28:45Nyc story keep up d gud work«123» 14 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2016-12-19 19:30:35It was great.. Xnxx com Silencio would have been better if you were trying to keep Hermione quiet.Anonymous readerReport 2016-07-09 14:53:01this is fuckin’ awesome. next time do something with hermoine & twins , harry potter & molly weasely.Anonymous readerReport 2014-06-28 15:45:41the scene between ron and his mom is perfectAnonymous readerReport 2014-01-22 03:43:52I enjoyed these stories! Love the uses of spells and charms with Arthur and Hermoine!TobianoReport 2013-03-26 19:28:45Nyc story keep up d gud work«123» Love the uses of spells and charms with Arthur and Hermoine!TobianoReport 2013-03-26 19:28:45Nyc story keep up d gud work«123» Other than that, I loved it! 14 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2016-12-19 19:30:35It was great.. Other than that, I loved it! 14 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2016-12-19 19:30:35It was great.. Love the uses of spells and charms with Arthur and Hermoine!TobianoReport 2013-03-26 19:28:45Nyc story keep up d gud work«123»
