Part of writing is telling a story, and that generally involves letting the readers SEE the characters. Xnxx He loved to brag to me about the fact that he was with my sister and that he’d had his hand on her tits or some silly shit. “Incest is a must!” cracked me up for the fact he is blasting someone for writing a story about incest on a site that hosts Snuff, Rape, and Cannibalism. Wasn’t unreadable or anything, but dialogue was a bit rough towards the beginning. And, to the haters, um, you’re trolls. Other than that, not bad.Anonymous readerReport 2009-08-26 09:36:15Needs some structure work (spelling, grammar, etc) but decent story. I don’t wanna vote cause I don’t think you deserve a negative or positive vote.Anonymous readerReport 2009-08-27 19:46:48Mr. I was on the snare line in marching band and my sister, then a senior, was dating the leader of the drum line. She sucked my dick many times and I eventually claimed her virginity. He loved to brag to me about the fact that he was with my sister and that he’d had his hand on her tits or some silly shit.
