Even the end . 6 s«12»Report 2015-07-26 14:24:24Sequal pleaseReport 2009-10-26 11:07:41Good story well told. Xnxx . . I think you gave up a little too soon, though. . In supposed True Story land. Unless uve got a wise knowing friend to run it past. It had that rare reality feel! Writing.Report 2009-03-19 01:39:43a nice story but a quick end, next time try to create some more dramaYoungAuthorReport 2009-03-07 16:08:39not bad at all! I think you gave up a little too soon, though. The story may only slightly gain but u have learned. 6 s«12»Report 2015-07-26 14:24:24Sequal pleaseReport 2009-10-26 11:07:41Good story well told. Writing.Report 2009-03-19 01:39:43a nice story but a quick end, next time try to create some more dramaYoungAuthorReport 2009-03-07 16:08:39not bad at all! . Even the end . . Writing.Report 2009-03-19 01:39:43a nice story but a quick end, next time try to create some more dramaYoungAuthorReport 2009-03-07 16:08:39not bad at all! Other tip at this level write, check, edit, put away for 3 days and check and edit again.
