Kudos for that I suppose.READERReport 2004-07-16 23:32:53The mother-fucking author did not even edit this piece of shit before posting it. People who don’t edit their stories before posting them are assuming that their audience are as moronic and sloppy as what they are. Xnxx com People who don’t edit their stories before posting them are assuming that their audience are as moronic and sloppy as what they are. Try to be a little more vivid when you write. Try to be a little more vivid when you write. 3/10 only because you wrote a story and were able to separate your thoughts into paragraphs. The poor form relegates this story to ash heap of shitty porn stories.READERReport 2004-07-16 04:38:29i think that that story was a bit too forward and un-natural, and yeah, i agree, needs more deatil.READERReport 2004-07-15 17:22:23I thought this story was OK. The poor form relegates this story to ash heap of shitty porn stories.READERReport 2004-07-16 04:38:29i think that that story was a bit too forward and un-natural, and yeah, i agree, needs more deatil.READERReport 2004-07-15 17:22:23I thought this story was OK.
