Also had problem breathing between paragraphs! Finally SPELL CHECK. Xnxx tv you need to use some paragraphs it’s really easy to lose your place when you dont use periods its also very confusing because you dont know when the sentence ends or starts your shpelink aslo sukz balsz
i think you need to revise.READERReport 2007-03-29 23:26:09im not sure why it doesn’t paragraph it when it loads i have them as word doc’s and they are paragraphed no offense taken and i hope that you’ll continue reading while i try to figure out how to load them in properly…thanks againREADERReport 2007-03-26 13:01:34Don’t take this the wrong way but you asked for contructive comments so here goes. Howvever, on a plus note, you do have an easy to read writing manner, that IF you formed into paras and spell checked and used the correct tense would probably manke a very readable story. you need to use some paragraphs it’s really easy to lose your place when you dont use periods its also very confusing because you dont know when the sentence ends or starts your shpelink aslo sukz balsz
i think you need to revise.READERReport 2007-03-29 23:26:09im not sure why it doesn’t paragraph it when it loads i have them as word doc’s and they
