9 comments«12»READERReport 2007-12-13 14:56:43The story qaw OK but your spelling mistakes ruined my possible enjoyment of the story. 9 comments«12»READERReport 2007-12-13 14:56:43The story qaw OK but your spelling mistakes ruined my possible enjoyment of the story. Xnxx com 9 comments«12»READERReport 2007-12-13 14:56:43The story qaw OK but your spelling mistakes ruined my possible enjoyment of the story. You had a lot of simple typing errors.READERReport 2007-08-12 13:27:19The last paragraph ruined the rest of the story for me.READERReport 2007-06-16 22:46:24fuck them! 9 comments«12»READERReport 2007-12-13 14:56:43The story qaw OK but your spelling mistakes ruined my possible enjoyment of the story. You ought to read over your stories before you submit. You ought to read over your stories before you submit. it was a good story«12» it was a good story«12» You ought to read over your stories before you submit. You ought to read over your stories before you submit. Use spell check or some other package the next timeREADERReport 2007-11-05 00:07:59Buy a keyboard with a ‘v’ on it!READERReport 2007-09-21 01:36:26It was ok til the last paragraph. Use spell check or some other package the next timeREADERReport 2007-11-05 00:07:59Buy a keyboard with a ‘v’ on it!READERReport 2007-09-21 01:36:26It was ok til the last paragraph. You ought to read over your stories before you submit. Use spell check or some other package the next
