so I will give this story series an overall 5/10. Xnxx video But didn’t like the Cliffhangers at the end though. so I will give this story series an overall 5/10. so I will give this story series an overall 5/10. You should clarify which was doing what thus allowing better understanding of the situation. cliffhangers are not fun«12345» cliffhangers are not fun«12345» that being said I know this is a work of fiction but you raced through several things that should have had more of a build up. at one part in these last few chapters during the threesome with His girlfriend and cousin I could not tell which one was doing what since you failed to name who the third party person was until the end. cliffhangers are not fun«12345» Also shit way to end it. You should had added more parts.Report 2016-06-30 21:55:58Please do more the best stories I’ve ever read PleaseMerc098Report 2016-03-31 08:25:36ok so apart from the spelling and grammar errors, your story has much to be desired. while the plot was decent and had some alluring elements, it was lacking character development and realism. while the plot was decent and had some alluring elements, it was lacking character development and realism. that being said I know this
