21 comments«12345»READERReport 2005-12-13 17:10:22Not a bad story but hearing her refer to him as “my brother ” got old quick. Xnxx One still comes to visit for a repeat whem my husband of ten years is on the road. 21 comments«12345»READERReport 2005-12-13 17:10:22Not a bad story but hearing her refer to him as “my brother ” got old quick. Using the phrase “my brother so often” detracted from an other wise great story. Also, why were two paragraphs repeated in the story.«12345» 9/10READERReport 2005-06-27 12:07:25My three older brothers did me like that forl years. Other than that, it was a greeat story.READERReport 2005-09-24 14:37:15good story. A bit of dialogue issues, and some proofreading stuff, but other than that, great. Using the phrase “my brother so often” detracted from an other wise great story. Other than that, it was a greeat story.READERReport 2005-09-24 14:37:15good story. Using the phrase “my brother so often” detracted from an other wise great story. One still comes to visit for a repeat whem my husband of ten years is on the road. Loved the storyREADERReport 2005-06-09 08:32:07Not bad.
