I’m asking this because from what I’ve ready, it seems like the characters are gay, which doesn’t bother me, any, but I’d like to see you fill in the blankness of the characters in your story. Xnxx sex Also please go into a bit more detail about his passed, what made his family resent him so bad, and treat him the way they did. What makes these other male characters what to get their rocks off on and in him? The majority of us know what a basic house and school layout is like, so there you’re fine. We as readers can not see what you have in your head, so as a writer it is your job to make us see it by describing what you see. What makes these other male characters what to get their rocks off on and in him? 8 comments«12»AnnistaysiaReport 2014-12-17 06:53:55I reread my previous comment and decided to post another to elaborate on something’s a little further. Does that mean he has long hair, short hair, female breasts, wide hips, and slender legs? We as readers can not see what you have in your head, so as a writer it is your job to make us see it by describing what you see.
