DID THEY EVER FEEL ANYTHING FOR EACH OTHER BEFORE THIS? Xnxx com delete and rewrite using a good editor before reposting THEN IT MIGHT BE WORTH READING.anonymous readerReport 2013-06-01 18:21:12Not really much to say that hasn’t already been said. DO THE PARENTS FIND OUT? where is the background and character development? personality and character traits, how they interact in normal situations, etc. YOU NEED A LOT MORE DETAIL AND AND A MUCH LONGER CHAPTER TO TELL THE STORY. AS IS THIS WAS WAY TO SHORT AND WAY TO RUSHED AND NEEDS TO BE DELETED.anonymous readerReport 2013-07-15 21:15:41not good this reads like it should be chapter two not one. WHERE ARE THEY? WHERE ARE THE PARENTS? YOU NEED A LOT MORE DETAIL AND AND A MUCH LONGER CHAPTER TO TELL THE STORY. WHAT KIND OF SEXUAL EXPERIENCE DO THEY HAVE. where is the background and character development? where is the background and character development? delete and rewrite using a good editor before reposting THEN IT MIGHT BE WORTH READING.anonymous readerReport 2013-06-01 18:21:12Not really much to say that hasn’t already been said.
