Grammar and sentences and storylineanonymous readerReport 2011-02-28 01:46:22U shud rite moar pokemon with ash and mistyanonymous readerReport 2011-01-15 21:58:29You’re good, but need some tutoring in spelling and sentance structure. Not much PokeMon anything can get me going but this did.Anonymous readerReport 2009-02-26 02:53:34Fuck off this is great write some moreAnonymous readerReport 2009-01-28 03:58:37horrible grammar and no viable story line or good detail«1» Not much PokeMon anything can get me going but this did.Anonymous readerReport 2009-02-26 02:53:34Fuck off this is great write some moreAnonymous readerReport 2009-01-28 03:58:37horrible grammar and no viable story line or good detail«1» 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2017-01-14 14:25:55This needs work. Xnxx Not much PokeMon anything can get me going but this did.Anonymous readerReport 2009-02-26 02:53:34Fuck off this is great write some moreAnonymous readerReport 2009-01-28 03:58:37horrible grammar and no viable story line or good detail«1» Not much PokeMon anything can get me going but this did.Anonymous readerReport 2009-02-26 02:53:34Fuck off this is great write some moreAnonymous readerReport 2009-01-28 03:58:37horrible grammar and no viable story line or good detail«1» Grammar and sentences and storylineanonymous readerReport 2011-02-28 01:46:22U shud rite moar pokemon with ash and mistyanonymous readerReport 2011-01-15 21:58:29You’re good, but need some tutoring in spelling and sentance structure.
