. Xnxx tv good story i guess, spellcheck major, and make it longer, what kinky stuff did they do?Anonymous readerReport 2009-02-23 13:12:30Maybe next time you should make up names because “Brother” and “sis” aren’t every realisticREADERReport 2008-01-22 17:08:53On the one hand, the others are right, this could do with a little polish, some elbow grease, and a spell checker. A creative writing class wouldn’t hurt either, but i don’t think it’s absolutely necessary. So you’re not half bad.READERReport 2008-01-04 02:40:15Every day that summer I took a walk in the woods and it took me a little time to build up the courage to ask if I could join in, the said “yes”, and that was the best dam summer I ever had, it was even better when there Aunt Anna came to visit, we did some kinky shit. 4/10 for the story, maybe a 5/10 because of effort. . My own rate about a 6/10, 7/10 for effort. That would be a good lesson for you, a challenge to see how well you can write. You could be a good writer if you really tried and made sure that the spelling was right before being submitted.
