This chapter is a major disapointment to this reader, as to the direction taken in the lives of Kevin and Lilly!!!!! I read his work and get insight into the authors mind, his passion, sensitivity and needs. Sex xnxx Bu«12» I’m not beating up on the writer; my s, to be perfectly frank and honest, is only for the purpose of constructive criticism–not to degrade nor diminish the story nor the writer!! Bu«12» If one were blindfolded and sauntered up to Chapters 02 versus Chapter 03, and read them without any knowledge that Chapter 03 is a continuation of Chapter 02, the reader would NEVER have any inkling, any feeling, any consideration the two chapters were related, the reader would never know. 03″ – Kevin and Lilly – (Brother and Sister)
This chapter is like two ships passing in the night–kind of like the lights were blinked as an acknowledgement of their presence, and then they continued on as if they were destined to bigger and better things separately in other parts of the world!!
