6 comments«12»Penneypad23Report 2011-07-06 03:10:38no her eyes weren’t green at the beginning, mia’s wereREADERReport 2009-05-26 02:03:50nothing more than the best on this site good jobTheOneTrueGodReport 2009-05-26 00:02:52I have many things to say about this story. A kid with dead parents moves in with rich adopted family…it would need an antagonist, ect., but it is possible. Sex xnxx also, please write a sequel of some sort…maybe Finn’s continued adventures with sexuality. A kid with dead parents moves in with rich adopted family…it would need an antagonist, ect., but it is possible. PLEASE WRITE MORE … You should proofread your stories before submitting them.Anonymous readerReport 2009-05-25 19:25:53wow… Once again, absolutely superb, well done, and keep ’em cumming ;)Anonymous readerReport 2009-05-25 20:16:34Very nice love story. PLEASE WRITE MORE … For one thing, it was excellent. It’s plot could be made into that of a real book… PLEASE WRITE MORE … PLEASE!!!!«12» This is definitely one of the top four stories on this whole site. This is definitely one of the top four stories on this whole site.
