This, like so many other stories, coulda been a contender.Fix’mReport 2011-04-26 17:28:07After reading the first story I thought that this fledgling series had potential, but after reading the second I have to admit that I was wrong. In order to make a good story, you have to make characters we can relate to, sympathize with, root for or just plain want to see them get beat down. Xnxx tv In order to make a good story, you have to make characters we can relate to, sympathize with, root for or just plain want to see them get beat down. This, like so many other stories, coulda been a contender.Fix’mReport 2011-04-26 17:28:07After reading the first story I thought that this fledgling series had potential, but after reading the second I have to admit that I was wrong. This was a useless chapter with nothing to differentiate form any other story. kinda.. In order to make a good story, you have to make characters we can relate to, sympathize with, root for or just plain want to see them get beat down.
