Try to get better at storytelling.«1» I got pretty hot reading it. Then the queen died, of grief.”
Why something happens is very important to story telling. Xnxx video The story’s big weakness is, each thing happening in the story doesn’t follow in an interesting way. The story’s big weakness is, each thing happening in the story doesn’t follow in an interesting way. I kind of hope she gets herpes and never is able to have sex again. Then the queen died.” It’s very rote and dull compared to, “The king died. Try to get better at storytelling.«1» I have suggestions to improve your story telling, if you’re happy with how you write, then just ignore the following. I kind of hope she gets herpes and never is able to have sex again. Interesting reasons why, make better stories. It seemed like she suddenly just went along with everything, after her initial dismissal of Ray’s offer. She is a horrible human being and I would be surprised if anyone cared for her. Thanks for writing it. Or revenge of chemical castration by the husband. Interesting reasons why, make better stories. I got pretty hot reading it.
