dont be a pussy!anonymous readerReport 2013-10-06 00:34:09Oh the humanity! The problems that I had was the constant shifting between different points of view. Xnxx Please stop writing and find another hobby. SHIT. It does get tedious at times trying to follow the story line. It does get tedious at times trying to follow the story line. The second problem was that it became repetitive. Be my mom sis or daugher?:) texy 6025702936anonymous readerReport 2013-09-23 19:46:20Switching points of view between the characters is a technique this author uses in almost all of his stories. Please stop writing and find another hobby. Your stories are badly written rip offs of other much better authors.krc1993Report 2013-09-24 04:52:54Anu females age 18-45 wanna roleplay? This became confusing after awhile. is. It does get tedious at times trying to follow the story line. The problems that I had was the constant shifting between different points of view. This became confusing after awhile. My question for BLUEHEATT himself is, “Why are you re-posting some of your stories?”
This story was first posted on 06-22-2012, under the same title, almost verbatim, except for the last few lines of the ending.PenKnave193Report 2013-09-23 13:41:48On the whole not a bad story.
