Here’s a tip you spelled “cavron” incorrectly it’s actually cabron. Xnxx com Yes, you can go look that word up, too.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-21 22:45:08That’s strange you call yourself a “Redneck” yet you use Spanish, albeit quite poorly. Secondly, you used a comma where a semicolon belongs, and then didn’t add commas where they were needed. You’re gonna give us all a bad name with with your damn nonsense. Secondly, you used a comma where a semicolon belongs, and then didn’t add commas where they were needed. For someone who calls himself(?) a grammar Nazi, you suck at English. There should be a very noticeable difference. 13 s«123»Report 2016-08-13 07:17:21Good grief. When you’re confident that your story is as good as it’s going to get, post it. First, it’s spelled ‘grammar’. 13 s«123»Report 2016-08-13 07:17:21Good grief. It’s also a cliff hanger which I personally don’t like. Good Luck.anonymous readerReport 2013-12-08 12:51:06I look forward to reading part 2anonymous readerReport 2013-08-31 03:52:09One of the most eloquent burns I’ve seen on this site. Better proof reading would greatly enhance this story. Some of the ers have worse english than Matthew54057. For someone who calls himself(?) a grammar Nazi, you suck at English. It’s the grammar that’s bad.
