It has a great potential to be a good story. It has a great potential to be a good story. Xnxx hd As far as the content. Please rewrite and submit after proof reading it first. Please rewrite and submit after proof reading it first. The poor sad twats who rant at you seem to be too fucking stupid to realize that fiction means it’s not fucking real and it didn’t fucking happen, it’s just words loonies.Anonymous readerReport 2009-05-23 18:24:57Erm…kinda sick tbh.Anonymous readerReport 2009-05-12 23:41:15XD a four year is not to young
=P I know if i had a daughter it would be like this everynight«12345» 4/10 writing skills
8/10 story line.anonymous readerReport 2011-09-18 04:23:29that sucked the little girl was only four atleast u could have done was your 11 old daughter thes people make sickBig Willy.Report 2010-05-17 17:47:55You have a reasonable writing style but your lousy spelling spoils it, words like through, you wrote throw, are hardly difficult, perhaps English isn’t your first language. Please rewrite and submit after proof reading it first. Please rewrite and submit after proof reading it first. 31 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2016-10-14 11:19:42Yes, your writing skills are very poor and I will give it to the other critics for that. 4/10 writing skills
8/10 story line.anonymous readerReport 2011-09-18 04:23:29that sucked the little girl
