It stands good on its own but I’d like to see you edit it and add more. Me personally I give it 3 out of 5 and I look foward to see this progress.anonymous readerReport 2013-04-19 06:01:46A great story but needs to be longer. Xnxx video WHERE ARE THEY? this is a first draft only and need major work before it is posted. DO THEY KEEP FUCKING OR WAS IT A ONE TIME THING? WHERE ARE THEY? WHO ARE THEY? It stands good on its own but I’d like to see you edit it and add more. WHAT KIND OF SEXUAL EXPERIENCE DO THEY HAVE. DID THEY EVER FEEL ANYTHING FOR EACH OTHER BEFORE THIS? DID THEY EVER FEEL ANYTHING FOR EACH OTHER BEFORE THIS? WHAT KIND OF SEXUAL EXPERIENCE DO THEY HAVE. personality and character traits, how they interact in normal situations, etc. personality and character traits, how they interact in normal situations, etc. DO THE PARENTS FIND OUT? this is a first draft only and need major work before it is posted. I’d still give 5 stars for the story and look forward to part 2.
