Con’s:
You need more dialoge during the sex because all you mainly did was describe it, your next story needs to have more dialoge during sex.«12345» What kind of shit is that? the experience would have done you good LOLReport 2008-12-19 10:39:59Good story.OrtsmaReport 2008-12-05 01:15:07″Never saw her again…”? Xnxx com the experience would have done you good LOLReport 2008-12-19 10:39:59Good story.OrtsmaReport 2008-12-05 01:15:07″Never saw her again…”? the experience would have done you good LOLReport 2008-12-19 10:39:59Good story.OrtsmaReport 2008-12-05 01:15:07″Never saw her again…”? lol Great Story though.Report 2008-11-28 21:24:44Decent story
Pro’s:
Good Storyline
Not a half bad job with describing the sex. Con’s:
You need more dialoge during the sex because all you mainly did was describe it, your next story needs to have more dialoge during sex.«12345» lol Great Story though.Report 2008-11-28 21:24:44Decent story
Pro’s:
Good Storyline
Not a half bad job with describing the sex. lol Great Story though.Report 2008-11-28 21:24:44Decent story
Pro’s:
Good Storyline
Not a half bad job with describing the sex. Con’s:
You need more dialoge during the sex because all you mainly did was describe it, your next story needs to have more dialoge during sex.«12345» the experience would have done you good LOLReport 2008-12-19 10:39:59Good story.OrtsmaReport 2008-12-05 01:15:07″Never saw her again…”? lol Great Story though.Report 2008-11-28 21:24:44Decent story
Pro’s:
Good Storyline
Not a half bad job with describing the sex. Con’s:
You need more dialoge during the sex because all you mainly
