It was written in a rush of words. Why? Sex xnxx was it listed under rape?Report 2009-04-07 16:20:01not bad but not great
work on your description and on the emotions of the people in the story
7/10Report 2009-03-30 09:44:15good to see another ausi getting on this site, i know that here technically this story was rape, but imo it shouldnt be in this section. It was written in a rush of words. The grammar wasn’t perfect but hey who cares. The grammar wasn’t perfect but hey who cares. 12 s«123»RatbagboyReport 2011-11-30 21:54:18As an older Australian guy I can understand the conflicting emotions. The grammar wasn’t perfect but hey who cares. It sounded like a true life experience to me…anonymous readerReport 2011-09-21 01:00:03I really didn’t think it was anything special. Why? Why? It was written in a rush of words. It sounded like a true life experience to me…anonymous readerReport 2011-09-21 01:00:03I really didn’t think it was anything special. Why? that being said, awsome story if u dont put no.2 in the rape section pls post in here where it isjohnReport 2009-03-29 13:12:46Just had to slip my shorts down and take him i hand ,great storie«123» It was written in a rush of words.
