Except for submarines and then there is nothing but targets.tjgorlaReport 2009-10-23 16:32:03great story thanks for sharing.Anonymous readerReport 2009-10-23 16:15:52The run-on and confusing sentences made it a hard read. Xnxx video You had a whole paragraph consisting of a single sentence. I’m not asking for impeccable grammar, but it was just bad.robbiexxReport 2009-10-23 16:05:57AUTHOR RAMLES ON TOO MUCK. You had a whole paragraph consisting of a single sentence. HE HUGGED THE WOMAN AND WALKED OUT THE DOOR IS A BAD BREAK IN SEQUENCE«1» Boats are for bathtubs and rubber duckys! The words don’t clearly describe what’s going on. They’re SHIPS not boats. They’re SHIPS not boats. Except for submarines and then there is nothing but targets.tjgorlaReport 2009-10-23 16:32:03great story thanks for sharing.Anonymous readerReport 2009-10-23 16:15:52The run-on and confusing sentences made it a hard read. 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-10-24 22:20:49qine naneReal NavyReport 2009-10-23 18:43:36Navy Man, my ass. Except for submarines and then there is nothing but targets.tjgorlaReport 2009-10-23 16:32:03great story thanks for sharing.Anonymous readerReport 2009-10-23 16:15:52The run-on and confusing sentences made it a hard read. You had a whole paragraph consisting of a single sentence. Except for submarines and then there is nothing but targets.tjgorlaReport 2009-10-23 16:32:03great story thanks for sharing.Anonymous readerReport 2009-10-23 16:15:52The run-on and confusing sentences made it a hard read.
