Sometimes a bit predictable, sometimes too intimately detailed, sometimes just boring. I suppose your level of education causes some problems, but you do try to make up for it with your imagination; it’s just a pity that lack of proof-reading makes the errors stand out like dog’s balls. Xnxx video Please desist from posting until you learn more about WRITING!!!anonymous readerReport 2012-12-22 09:50:08Liked alot 9/10 from meanonymous readerReport 2012-11-21 11:13:19Yeah i Was using a mobile phone to read this story kind of hard reading it When you double spacing it but however great story :)«123» You’re stories are “NOW” 9.5/10 and as I’m about 1/2 way through them now I think they are getting better than they were before, as time progresses.Anonymous readerReport 2015-10-20 13:23:23Yeah, must agree about the double-spacing, spelling errors, poor grammar, but I DO LIKE YOUR STORIES. I can understand you being pissed off with the criticism you get; just understand that improvement best comes by responding to criticism, without criticism one tends to become delusional about one’s abilities, adopting an aura of self-perceived perfection. I can understand you being pissed off with the criticism you get; just understand that improvement best comes by responding to criticism, without criticism one tends to become delusional about one’s abilities, adopting an aura
